INITIAL/BASIC PITCH: Our music video will feature a washed up, ex-super villain who walks around causing petty annoyances, trying to relive his glory days.
Throughout our planning, as our ideas became more developed and we focused on the larger, macro narratives and themes of the video, our pitch became more detailed and specific in what we were trying to achieve.
FINAL PITCH: Our music will video will feature a 'super villian' character who portrays the negative side of one personality. He will go around causing petty annoyances and will end up directly fighting with a 'super hero' character who portrays the positive side of a personality. The video is a physical metaphor for the inner struggle one person can have between the good and bad parts of their personality.
Sounds like a good idea... although having seen your rough cut, this wouldn't be my reading of the video. Isn't it more about the duality of humans... reflected in the lyric 'try as I might I'm losing the fight to get better'. Might be worth reviewing this pitch... but keep this one too to show how your ideas have developed.
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